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Week 1 -

ParticleString.eps     great!

Two-Membrane.eps       good - in both cases, the bottom edge of the 
                       string worldsheet/2-brane is too straight to 
                       be beautiful; Derek's fault, not yours.

Week 2 -

ParabShapes.eps        great!

Xt.eps                 the little arrows aren't pretty - the "head" 
                       is almost as big as the length of the arrow. 
                       xfig allows for different kinds of arrow heads -
                       and maybe different sizes too?  A solid small
                       arrowhead like Derek's would be best.

Week 3 -

XvsTX.eps              great, but please delete the huge "parentheses"
                       around the tangent bundle TX.  Derek's fault, or mine,
                       not yours!

Week 4 -

LevelCurves.eps        the partial derivatives like 
                       $\frac{\partial H}{\partial p}$ are all missing the
                       \partial symbol in the denominator.  Otherwise great.

Week 5 -

XvsTqstarX.eps         in my version of the .eps file, some of the picture
                       can't be seen - it's fallen off the top edge.  This 
                       can be cured by making a perfectly transparent object 
                       in the xfig file, slightly above the picture you want 
                       us to see.
                   
                       Could you please label the point at the tail of the 
                       horizontal arrow by $q$?  My fault, not yours.

Week 6 -

GammaBoundSigma.eps    again some of the picture has fallen off the top
                       edge.  Otherwise fine!

Week 7 -

One-DWorldline.eps     great!

p-DMembrane.eps        good - for perfect beauty, the bottom boundary of
                       the string worldsheet should look more like an ellipse,
                       not pointy at the ends.  I know this is hard to achieve!

TangentVector.eps      great!

ShadedPar.eps          great!

Week 8 - 

GammaBoundRegion.eps   the funny thing that looks like a caterpillar 
                       on the surface S should really be a handle: 
                       Derek was trying to draw a nontrivial Riemann 
                       surface with a circle as boundary.  See below!

GammaBoundSolid.eps    again, for perfect beauty the equator of the sphere
                       would look be an ellipse, not pointy at the ends.

Maps.eps               great!

Week 9 -

Handle.eps             good!  This picture would be better to use for
                       GammaBoundRegion.eps than what we have now!  

TwoPaths.eps           could you draw dots at the points x and y?
                       Derek's fault, not yours.

TgPlaneSphere.eps      Please chop this into two separate pictures, since
                       it's really two things: a region in the sphere labelled
                       Sigma (to illustrate one equation) and parallel transport                       of a vector around a loop (to illustrate another).

Joining.eps            great!